Monday, March 8, 2010

[Post 2] Comment by Hongchuan over Jieyang's Summary

The summary written by Jieyang is well-structured. He first gave an introduction about the meeting held in Copenhagen and he stated that the meeting was not a success. I also personally agree with him. As a matter of fact, the energy consumption to run this event is huge. The meeting was originated to solve global warming but ironically, it became a great source of carbon emission.

Jieyang's elaboration started with the fact that there are certain difficulties for the treaty/agreement to be established as developed countries and developing countries are just two completely different worlds, they will seek for their own good so the treaty cannot be agreed mutually and Jieyang also provided some solutions and approaches to solve this difficulties and he mentioned that responsibility is the key element for both developed and developing countries to solve this global issue.

Overall, his summary was not bad but there's still room for improvements. Hope he will do it well in final draft!

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